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model/MUA: Sam Scibetta :iconint3stineno0se:
wardrobe: model's own - picked out by myself
photographer: me

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I think this one needs some cropping. There's too much foreground with nothing interesting happening in it, and since it's not about the leaves perhaps they shouldn't take up so much of the frame. I think the white corner at the top should either be burned in or cropped out because it's very hot and distracting.

We ended up with some great colors, though. The moss, the stone and my skirt look awesome together.
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Oh, yeah, and I'll totally fav it if you fix it. :)
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Thanks for the ideas, Sam! I totally didn't even notice the corner but I had also been staring at all of the pictures for hours (mostly because every time I changed something it took the computer 20 min to process it - UGH).

I also think that sometimes we need a second eye checking out our work to catch things that we haven't. Now that I look at this again I can see what you mean about the leaves monopolizing the space in the picture.

I'll be editing it soon. I just have to catch up on some other works that I have put off because of teh computer of doom.

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April 12
7.5 MB
377 KB
1024×1536

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Camera Data

Canon
Canon EOS DIGITAL REBEL XS
1/4 second
F/25.0
40 mm
100
Mar 19, 2009, 2:20:52 PM

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